My First Ever Map.

[EliteKnight]

I have finished my first ever map i made right im so happy i did it if you guys want a try so take your time and have a go heres some screenshots.







Hope you enjoy the map please leave feedback.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=O9D2NZRV

EliteKnight

[wacko]

Congrats Looks like clean brushwork!

This is Spearhead, isn't it? Think, I read sth in another thread...
If so, I can't test it. and can't say much about general layout. map file probably isn't included?!

From the screens I'd say:
Consider adding some details to make it look more interesting:
E.g. in your 2nd screen, the sarcophagi look like just huge stoneblocks, u'd better try to find some textures showing carvings and a lid...

In your last screen the hedgehogs seem to float in the air, they'd rather stick in the ground. The fires are too large. Better scale them down or add a bowl underneath.

You could try to experiment with those stone textures I did use in wolf, circus, burg (yes, I like them textures much ), if it hadn't to be african/egypt style.

Keep it up

[erick]

Nice work
but as wacko said the fires were to big and the textures were kind of repetitive.

Maps are great! Keep on mapping!