Just Saying Howdy and Posting Some Screenies

[Shifty]

Hey there

I'm Shifty from the UK I've only recently got into mapping and Hope to have my 1st map released Very Soon I also have my Mapping & Editing site so check it out http://www.shiftys-bunker.tk

I'm also gonna post some screenshots - This is my 1st map and isnt nowhere near as good as the stuff i've seen on here but im learning.

"War in a Hall"

The Objective Will Be for the Allies to kill a German Officer









The Loader



If you've got Any Suggestions Please Post them

Thanks

Shifty

[mohaa_rox]

It definitely looks good.

[Surgeon]

Try to break up large areas of the same texture with small borders - try looking at an official map with a similar theme as yours....

[General Death]

For your first map your showing great potential.

[jv_map]

Also attach some lamp models to the ceilings along with the point lights.

Anyway it's looking okay for a first map.

[Gizzy (nl)]

looking nice...

but add some poles to which the fence attaches...now the fence just "hangs" there

[Shifty]

thx for the comments and suggestion ill get right on them

Im thinking of adding a second objective to the map

This is the description i came up with

WAR IN A HALL

A Top Secret German installation run by a Highly Influential Nazi Officer (Who has recently been discovered to be a Spy in the allies midst) has obtained Very Sensitive information regarding the Allied offensive. The Officer "General Von Klinkerhoffen (ello ello was a funny TV Show) has arrived back at at his base and is awaiting council with Hitler..

For the Allies this officer knows to much and must be "Removed" from his position information has come to there attention that all documents have been put into a safe "These papers must be taken back into allied Hands"

Objectives

- The Axis must defend the officer and the safe at all costs

- The Allies must Kill the Officer & Take back the Stolen Information

What do you think?

Shifty

[jv_map]

& Take back the Stolen Information

What do you mean? Take it back to the Allied base? Like in capture the flag? That's probably pretty difficult to script. Do the Germans have the possibility to return the papers to their base? Sounds like the Allied objective is much more difficult than the Axis, although you could perhaps give the Allies a couple of benefits.

[Shifty]

youd just find them and press use to pick them up thats all I meant

[jv_map]

Ok