my script for my first map and SP mission

[~::(eagle)::~minieggman]

this is only for the first level of 3 or 4. tell me what you think of it.

i will underline the things that i'll need help with the scripting.

The Battle of Stalingrad Mission plan.

Allies in Old mansion.
Spawn in ammunition room upstairs.
Ally walks in grabs a gun and walks out.
Walk out of room, talk to ally aiming at the street with a sniper rifle.
Lieutenant Graves: The Axis are planning to bomb us, soon. We?ve got two guys at the MG positions, one on each side of the house. We?ve got a team of snipers positioned on the top floor windows.
And we?ve got your team waiting down in the basement, camped, waiting for the Axis.
(You) Jimmy Patterson: So what am I supposed to do?
Lieutenant Graves: Well you, Sergeant, are supposed to Patrol the house and make sure no Axis get in?.
Allied sniper: Axis bomber, 12 ?o clock!
Sound of bomber flying by. Guns fire and top floor windows shatter.Lieutenant Graves: The Axis making a parachute jump down to the estate!
Lieutenant hands you a Springfield ?03 Sniper rifle.
Lieutenant Graves: Here?s a Sniper Rifle! Help us pick off these Axis!
Cue dramatic music. (Hopefully lord of the rings battle theme.)
5 Axis parachute down onto the road ahead of the Mansion, unclip their parachutes and make their way towards the mansion. Pick off the Axis as they head towards the Mansion.
Hold them off for 2 minutes, Axis re-spawn every 30 seconds, 20 enemies all together.
Graves gets shot and machine guns go crazy.
About 5 Axis fall, dead, outside the building.
downstairs:
One of three remaining allies: Sergeant, we need to get out of this Mansion before we get over-run again and Slaughtered.
Second of three remaining allies: Where are we gonna go?
Third of remaining allies: I suppose we?ll have to head back to base, outside of Stalingrad?
You: No, we?re gonna head straight to Stalingrad. And we?re leaving now.
Tires squeal outside of Mansion.
You: And that would be our transport.
STG44 fire.
You: This just keeps getting better and better?.
Follow me, we need to get out there!
Go out door into room and up ladder, out of back door and take control of one of the MGs and eliminate 5 enemies.
Head to front of house and get in jeep.
Driver: Glad you could join us! One of you take the gun.
Allies get into jeep and you take control of gun.
Level end.

I'll be making a post in the scripting forum to ask for help with the scripting. (as you can imagine all this stuff is probably hella hard)
i can do the basic stuff thats in the tuts like auto starting with weapons and stuff like that but the things i ask for help for will be in a post in the scripting forum.
enjpy helping me out,
-minieggman

[jv_map]

Maybe add some screenshots to your post... it helps motivate people

[~::(eagle)::~minieggman]

i havent finished mapping the level yet. i gotta add enemie spawns.

i posted a plan for what i want the scripting to do and when to do it in the scripting forum.

ill post some piccies of the 3d view in radiant in a min.. brb..

[mohaa_rox]

map finish first then script. it ensures less errors and redoing.