The Gates
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The Gates
I have just finished a map called The Gates. You can download it here > http://www.gionex.co.uk/TheGatesv1.pk3
Version 1.1 will be out in the future and will fix all bugs.
There may be an OBJ coming out soon aswell
Version 1.1 will be out in the future and will fix all bugs.
There may be an OBJ coming out soon aswell
ok, i have downloaded your map, and i like certain aspects, but some things have come to my attention:
firstly, texturing. you need to avoid colliding textures, such as the pic below. to stop this select both faces of both brushes and texture them as a whole. e.g:
shot0064.jpg
also i think the crates should not be breakable. they are good cover, and encourage the player to make use of the cover. but a single lob of a grenade will destroy the crates, i.e:
great cover!
shot0066.jpg
no cover.
shot0067.jpg
also, i noticed an error here, when u go down the steps neartthe entrance to the main area i think:
shot0072.jpg
shot0073.jpg
finally, you should avoid step brushes seemingly floating in mid air. you should make each step higher than the last, obviously, but it should touch the floor at the bottom. i.e:
shot0076.jpg
as you see it looks like the steps are floating in mid-air. not good.
things i like are the holes that people can shoot out of, and the prison/dungeon where there are dead bodies hanging from the walls. adds to the atomosphere well i think. i no they look wierd on the screen, but thats cause i have different skind installed i think:
shot0075.jpg
i look forward to the 1.1 update!
hope this helps you!
m4rine
***** EDIT by Bjarne **********
Dude... biiiig pictures
firstly, texturing. you need to avoid colliding textures, such as the pic below. to stop this select both faces of both brushes and texture them as a whole. e.g:
shot0064.jpg
also i think the crates should not be breakable. they are good cover, and encourage the player to make use of the cover. but a single lob of a grenade will destroy the crates, i.e:
great cover!
shot0066.jpg
no cover.
shot0067.jpg
also, i noticed an error here, when u go down the steps neartthe entrance to the main area i think:
shot0072.jpg
shot0073.jpg
finally, you should avoid step brushes seemingly floating in mid air. you should make each step higher than the last, obviously, but it should touch the floor at the bottom. i.e:
shot0076.jpg
as you see it looks like the steps are floating in mid-air. not good.
things i like are the holes that people can shoot out of, and the prison/dungeon where there are dead bodies hanging from the walls. adds to the atomosphere well i think. i no they look wierd on the screen, but thats cause i have different skind installed i think:
shot0075.jpg
i look forward to the 1.1 update!
hope this helps you!
m4rine
***** EDIT by Bjarne **********
Dude... biiiig pictures
"We must become the change we want to see in the world" (Mahatma Gandhi)
hehe, im too lazy to resize
learning? i think its who who are learning from me! oh yes, i am the undeniable champion. err. ok i am learing. but im not a grasshopper ok? i really should shut up now. i love these endless streams of spam i spew up when i have nothing to say. hehe.

learning? i think its who who are learning from me! oh yes, i am the undeniable champion. err. ok i am learing. but im not a grasshopper ok? i really should shut up now. i love these endless streams of spam i spew up when i have nothing to say. hehe.
"We must become the change we want to see in the world" (Mahatma Gandhi)

