.Map :: MoHAA Mapping

is it allright to asksome to review my map? if so it's here

it's my first map

nevermind

you shouldn't have posted that in this thread, you just set yourself up for a lot of abuse.

spend some time reading tutorials and messing around with radiant before you post something like that map for review. You will save yourself a lot of grief.

erm, needs more improvement though. a bit plain, and the doors all open wrong ways.