.Map :: MoHAA Mapping

Hi guys i've just made my first map, its a Liberation mode map so you'll need to have breakthrough to run it , it's based in berlin its very simplistic as i'm just getting to grips with radient. For the buildings i followed the tut on mannsteins level design , the script i followed the tut on this site.
I would really appreciate any comments or suggestions so my next map can be alot better , thx.

ok sorry guys cant get the link to work so if you want to take a look send me an email on hotspurs@hotmail.com

There is a thread in the "General discussion" forum on web hosting if you have problems publishing your files.

thanks i couldnt find anything that would help. I'm new to this internet thingy i have the webspace and i know how to upload files but dont know how to let others download from it .......can anyone put this noob out of his misery

It's very simple at the moment I personally don't use an FTP Client I just use Internet Explorer..

From your webhost get the ftp address and just put that in the internet explorers address bar, then you'll be asked for your username and password easy enuff, when thats done you'll now be able to upload stuff - which is as easy as dragging and dropping so then drag and drop for instance mymap.zip onto it you'll see a progress bar then to get the address of your file right click on it and select properties ther'll you'll see an ftp address for instance ftp://mywebsite@mywebsite.blahblahblah.com/mymap.zip

just edit it to http://mywebsite.blahblahblah.com/mymap.zip then put that address here and we'll be able to download it.

Hope this helps
and I'd like to see your map but I dont have breakthrough

thanks m8 i'll give it a go lol
but dont hold your breath

http://www.fixxxer.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk ... rgrund.pk3

hope you like it

how about some screenshots?take some and upload them the same way .and show them here .at least those with 56kbs see what they are dloading

Oh we do love screenshots!

ok heres some screenies they have been brightened up a bit on photoshop

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sorry for spamming your forum but just some back ground info on my map.
Those of you that have played liberation will know that the lag gets worse the longer the games go on, so i wanted a small compact map that would lead to fast and furious games and not too many camping spots.
Theres a few bits i couldn't fix like the texture on the bend in the tunnel (damn i spent days trying to fix that) but i was learning on the job so to speak, and there is a few dodgy clips.
I would really appreciate any comments good or bad though and the download is 824 kbs but you need to have the spearhead expansion cos alot of the textures are from ta/berlin.
I would like to say thanks for all the tutorials they really helped alot especially as i am not very computer literate.

Well: Make it a MOH:AA liberation map instead then... you wont get any lag, ever

wow thanks dude thats very helpful

well,u said some have screenies have been brightened up.but the 1st one looks very bright imo .also,the green ground looks 2 green .try looking for a darker green .i havent dloaded the map cause i have a few problems with the sh expansion (its not working )