.Map :: MoHAA Mapping

Ok, this is my first map. I know i have a few tweaks to do. Please let me know of any constuctive help....

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This is a tdm map. Can possibly be an obj, if changed for allied to blow up tanks.
Having Technical difficulties....
If you point your web browser/ftp to that ip, the loggin and pass is OFC

Thx
Bartok[/img]

Were we go:

1) The FPS is very low for a map that does not really need to have such bad FPS. I think you need to read up on the VIS compile process:
VIS for dummies
VIS design with detail and structural brushes
VIS leafgroup hands-on

2) There is way to much open spaces. A sniper will own any other weapons in this map. Start with a smaller map and populate it with with more stuff, dont just add space: add fun combat areas ( a flat area witout covers is not a fun combat area ).

3) There are loads of weapons in the house. Sure its fun to add, but It destroys gameplay ( this is just my personal opinion, lots of people disagree with me and think its a fun feature ).

4) The inside of the main building is very clean. Look around you, look around any environment: there are almost never totally flat surfaces. And if you find such a place: would you like to spend a lot of time there? I wouldent.

I've given you some tips, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way because you have a good start, but the map is not playable in its current state.

I do apreciate the constructive criticism, i have not done a "finial" compile, so i do hope to improve some areas.
I have already gained some fps by putting area portals in the doorways and tank garage.

Yes, i thought an ammo/weapon room would be cool.

Yes it is a good map for sniping. It started out with just the two bottom rooms, and a tutorial. Then it sprawled on from there.

I again thank you for the links, and suggestions.

Bartok

Your welcome. And remember: if its a sniper map: they need a little cover as well.
Oh, and there is no clipping on the planes, you can walk right througn them.